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 عنوان المشاركة: The Land of the Brokenhearted
مشاركة غير مقروءةمرسل: الجمعة أغسطس 15, 2008 5:24 am 
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اشترك في: الجمعة يوليو 11, 2008 3:06 am
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[eng]Against my will I parted
to the land of the Brokenhearted.
A place where lonely hearts go.
Somewhere where pain is so true.
Sailed through the sea of broken dreams,
where shattered dreams lie beneath,
and I lost myself or so it seemed.
They are both sea and shore
to a place you never long for.

I thought it would be a deserted place.
None is present of human race.
Alas, I found a whole world there,
of people who did not take their share,
of a life full of love and fair.

I looked in the water to see something of familiarity.
A dream I thought it was lost for eternity.
It was struggling the water to stay alive.
What a hope, my soul began to revive.
I ran to get it before it drowns.
But was hindered by the force of the unknown,
and on the ground I was thrown.

Suddenly, a hurricane out of the water came.
Then, a pure white cloud it became.
It was turned to a wonderful dove.
"Fly dove don't look around,
Soar over the ninth cloud"

With joy spread my hands in the wind.
"Oh, it is a new beginning"
and around myself I was spinning.
The cold wind is now turning to a beautiful fresh breeze,
Flirting with my hair and flees.
Hey, the prince of the day got back his throne.
His golden rays on the sand shone.
The smell of the sea perfumed my clothes.
For a moment I felt to heaven I was close.

So, the land of the Brokenhearted became the land of Providence
that rescued me from an Anonymous.[/eng]


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مشاركة غير مقروءةمرسل: السبت أغسطس 16, 2008 6:51 pm 
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اشترك في: الخميس سبتمبر 13, 2007 11:01 pm
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مكان: CAIRO
سؤل حكيم عن متي يكون الداء دواء؟؟؟

قال ما معناه لما يصبح هوا النفس داءها و تحاول التخلص منه فاذا تخلصت النفس من هذا الهوا الداء و اصبحت خاليه منه لصبح دواء النفس الداء نفسه


i learned that pleasure comes fast n' with pain comes treasure

so we delt what was felt n surevived fast measures

the last has past

now we entered the times were things dont last

take a sip off ur last glass

now pass
its the end of the task


see the last words r the past words

now get the verbs together creat the fast words

make money n live fast

live by sowrds now dead by sowrds

took what we gave

saved peeps now they call us brave

how far is visiting a grave to feel safe
from being close n living behind trails

why must visions be attacked

n a cute story turned wack

why must we take that without getting to reply back

break free to snap they rotten sack

become against whats familier

simply cuz whats famillier is far from true

now what to do

when doors are all jammed

every body running wild

cuz all they doors slammed

who has the upper cut dropped on my face

is it a stranger in my place

or my brother from this human race

can we walk ingrace without following who came 1st to this place

do we ask much if i said put a smile on ur face

n have a sweet day

cuz we alive now if we now to whome we pray

n who to call on to save or day

_________________
MAN LA ADAB LAHOW LA 3ELM 3ENDHOW.


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مشاركة غير مقروءةمرسل: الخميس أغسطس 28, 2008 3:32 am 
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اشترك في: الجمعة يوليو 11, 2008 3:06 am
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[eng]Dear brother Al Hafeed
First of all I'm so sorry for my very late reply but actually I was not at home for sometime and when I got back I had some problems with my network connection. Second, I'm over the moon because of your reply. I liked your piece of writing very much and for sure it responds in a positive way to what I wrote and gave my poem somekind of importance. As you indicated in your reply a man can be healed with the same thing that wonded him. I wanted very much to assert this point through this poem. I met some people who abandonned some places or even stop some of their habits because they remind them of something that hurt them or someone who broke their hearts. However, the same place that wounded us once can heal another wound in some other way. I think there is a wisdome behind this. God does everything for a purpose and form each mistake we do we have to learn something. That means that we must not stop at a certain incident that happend to us and start weeping because some poeple devote the rest of their lives crying over what have pased and they forget a very important fact that time heals. Once again thank you so much for your sweet reply. God bless you. and Rmadan kareem.[/eng]


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